Hi Today on Cyber Smart we learnt to Improve a blog comment to a quality blog comment. first I deleted his last name I improved his ideas and added a question so I hope you learnt how to improve your own blog post to a quality blog post blog you later.
Kia Ora Gammado,
ReplyDeleteIt's Mr Riceman from Waikowhai Primary here. Thanks for sharing your cybersmart learning. I really like the way that you have improved this comment, it is really specific. It reminds me of when I was first learning to comment in cybersmart and I had to make sure I included Positive, thoughtful and helpful ideas in a comment. Has this helped you when you add comments to other people's blogs?
Thanks for sharing.