when I First Arrived on the moon it was noon. I saw a fat cat, I thought it was flying just jokes I'm lying. oh please I thought it was cheese and almost ate it, but it was just bait to make me late.
I am loving all the posts you have been uploading. I have thoroughly enjoyed exploring your blog and finding some hilarious posts. This is a creative piece that you have put together with a distinctive rhythm. I found it entertaining, especially the line about the flying fat cat. I laughed out loud so I read your poem out to the 12 blog commenters that are sitting with me today. You brought a smile to our face.
How do you think you might feel as you step onto the moon? Being the first person to ever land on the moon I could imagine you would be feeling nervous or excited. What do you think?
As the activity asks you to create a poem about how you might be feeling when you land on the moon, could you respond to this comment describing your feelings to receive the full points.
Malo e lelei Gamado,
ReplyDeleteI am loving all the posts you have been uploading. I have thoroughly enjoyed exploring your blog and finding some hilarious posts. This is a creative piece that you have put together with a distinctive rhythm. I found it entertaining, especially the line about the flying fat cat. I laughed out loud so I read your poem out to the 12 blog commenters that are sitting with me today. You brought a smile to our face.
How do you think you might feel as you step onto the moon? Being the first person to ever land on the moon I could imagine you would be feeling nervous or excited. What do you think?
As the activity asks you to create a poem about how you might be feeling when you land on the moon, could you respond to this comment describing your feelings to receive the full points.
I cannot wait to read your response,
Megan :)